Blue heron ver 4


in the marsh
stands the prophet-
blue heron waits

So far I like this image best.

Read version 3 for comparison

Read version 2 for comparison

Read version 1 for comparison

9 responses »

  1. Herons often symbolize a prophetic move to a new home or workplace where there is greater opportunity and abundance so your first and last haiku for the blue heron is quite fitting and beautifully sketched in few words. Many thanks. I look forward to exploring more of your posts.

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