Mar20

First Flower ver. 4

Posted on March 20, 2012 by fiercebuddhist

This version is, once again, edited a bit. I prefer the word “lunch” to “basket here. The below combination of image and haiku is called a Haiga and you can expect to see more of them here in the future.

Thank you to blogger "Win Lose or Draw" for the use of the image.

Read Version 1
Read Version 2
Read Version 3

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Jeannie on March 20, 2012 at 09:06 said:

oh yes, I like this very much. Isn’t it amazing how changing one word changes the whole feel? This is very very nice. OK…today, version 4 is the winner! LOL

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Fergiemoto on March 20, 2012 at 12:37 said:

Beautiful!

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- fiercebuddhist on March 20, 2012 at 17:01 said:
  
  Thank you very much.
  
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winloseordraw on March 20, 2012 at 16:23 said:

I love how this turned out 🙂

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- fiercebuddhist on March 20, 2012 at 16:53 said:
  
  I thank you for your image. I hope you will allow me to use others in the future.
  
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Yousei Hime on March 21, 2012 at 07:38 said:

Very nice…haiku and image both. I look forward to more haiga. Thank you for taking the time to read that latest write. It’s a bit longer than haiku, neh?

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- fiercebuddhist on March 21, 2012 at 09:46 said:
  
  Well worth the time to read. Great work.
  
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