sunlight
rouses daffodils-
picnic basket
Here is the third revision of “First Flower.” This version comes after a discussion with Robert D. Wilson of Simply Haiku. I have cut it down quite a bit from the others and have modified the line breaks as well. Enjoy.
I like #3 the best! 🙂
Thank you. There is a #4 coming.
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